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 Ferion II on the other hand was quite suitable planet for habitat. It was an M-class planet, with oxygen, nitrogen and carbon dioxide atmosphere. It would have already been colonized had there not been the constant electric storm that no one has yet understood. It is believed that something on the planet is creating it, as to why, no one knows, yet. <br><br>
-The Exploreison is the new kind of exploration vessel and the first vessel to be built under the name of Gigerdi Alliance. The Gigerdians had suffered many wars in the past, the secession war, Bacterian wars, and the Dominion war, but now even as things look bright, the darkest times of the Gigerdi Alliance were coming. Now the future of the alliance depends on Exploreison’s exploration mission. As one of the greatest wars in the history of Gigerdians was at hand…<br><br>
+The Exploreison is the new kind of exploration vessel and the first vessel to be built under the name of Gigerdi Alliance. The Gigerdians had suffered many wars in the past, the secession war, Bacterian wars, and the Timocracy war, but now even as things look bright, the darkest times of the Gigerdi Alliance were coming. Now the future of the alliance depends on Exploreison’s exploration mission. As one of the greatest wars in the history of Gigerdians was at hand…<br><br>
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 Gigerdius watched the Propaganda posters when a dark figure walked along the corridor, and accidentally hit him. “Uhh, I’m sorry,” Gigerdius apologized, the figure looked at him with a normal look, and responded: “That’s quite alright, Captain.” The man then walked away. Gigerdius is left to wonder the identity of this man. He looked at the direction the man headed for a while until he finally pressed his communicator and said: “Gigerdius to Drill, Drill have the repairs begun?” “Yes, sir, we’re starting them in about a minute,” responded Drill. “Good, I’ll contact you later in light of further developments, Gigerdius out,” replied Gigerdius and then started walking to Craal’s office.
-Gigerdius walked into Craal’s office, he saw Craal sitting behind his desk, reading something. The office was full of GA propaganda posters, a picture of President Rubek, and everything seemed to look very “Pro-GA”-like. Craal noticed and looked at Gigerdius, and calmly pointed Gigerdius to have a seat beside the desk: “Ah, Captain Gigerdius, sit down”, Gigerdius proceeded to sit down. Gigerdius: “There was something you needed to talk about?” Gigerdius looked at Craal. “Yes, there was. I wanted to tell you how things are run around here,” replied Craal. Gigerdius was bewildered by Craal’s words. He did not expect him to start a conversation this way. “I’m not so sure what you mean and how does it concern me?”, replied Gigerdius, wondering. Craal then proceeded to stand up from the chair: “As you might have seen, the order has been restored to this place, while our troops are occupying Bacterius, I can guarantee safety for our citizens here. Just like this office… it once belonged to one filthy Bacterian, but I rearranged it…” Craal looks at the propaganda posters on the wall and continues: “more appropriately. And removed all the Bacterian propaganda.” “I see…” responded Gigerdius, being surprised by the aggressive tone used by Craal. “Yes, and I know that there are traitors working to undermine the president’s authority as well, all I need you to do, is to keep watch of these saboteurs, just in case,” Craal continued and kept constant eye-contact with Gigerdius. “My position is really not to do these things,” said Gigerdius and then stood up and continued: “I devote my career to the exploration of other Galaxies and to diplomatic affairs”, Craal looked to his side and changed their topic of discussion: “Yes, but that’s a good looking ship, sad to see it in your hands.” “What do you mean?” asked Gigerdius, wondering Craal’s sudden switch of topic. “Let’s put it this way, I’ve heard about your little “Operation” during the Dominion war, and you’ve been to prison for it”, Craal explained, maintaining his very serious tone, which seemed to be become even more aggressive. Gigerdius also decided to take a more serious tone: “What has happened has happened, and that wasn’t really my fault even… But I’ve made things better for myself now.” “Say what you want, but I’ll be watching you like a hawk, that is all,” Craal said with very disrespectful voice. “Fine!” answered Gigerdius and left the office with frustration. Craal looked at Rubek’s face and smiled.
+Gigerdius walked into Craal’s office, he saw Craal sitting behind his desk, reading something. The office was full of GA propaganda posters, a picture of President Rubek, and everything seemed to look very “Pro-GA”-like. Craal noticed and looked at Gigerdius, and calmly pointed Gigerdius to have a seat beside the desk: “Ah, Captain Gigerdius, sit down”, Gigerdius proceeded to sit down. Gigerdius: “There was something you needed to talk about?” Gigerdius looked at Craal. “Yes, there was. I wanted to tell you how things are run around here,” replied Craal. Gigerdius was bewildered by Craal’s words. He did not expect him to start a conversation this way. “I’m not so sure what you mean and how does it concern me?”, replied Gigerdius, wondering. Craal then proceeded to stand up from the chair: “As you might have seen, the order has been restored to this place, while our troops are occupying Bacterius, I can guarantee safety for our citizens here. Just like this office… it once belonged to one filthy Bacterian, but I rearranged it…” Craal looks at the propaganda posters on the wall and continues: “more appropriately. And removed all the Bacterian propaganda.” “I see…” responded Gigerdius, being surprised by the aggressive tone used by Craal. “Yes, and I know that there are traitors working to undermine the president’s authority as well, all I need you to do, is to keep watch of these saboteurs, just in case,” Craal continued and kept constant eye-contact with Gigerdius. “My position is really not to do these things,” said Gigerdius and then stood up and continued: “I devote my career to the exploration of other Galaxies and to diplomatic affairs”, Craal looked to his side and changed their topic of discussion: “Yes, but that’s a good looking ship, sad to see it in your hands.” “What do you mean?” asked Gigerdius, wondering Craal’s sudden switch of topic. “Let’s put it this way, I’ve heard about your little “Operation” during the Timocracy war, and you’ve been to prison for it”, Craal explained, maintaining his very serious tone, which seemed to be become even more aggressive. Gigerdius also decided to take a more serious tone: “What has happened has happened, and that wasn’t really my fault even… But I’ve made things better for myself now.” “Say what you want, but I’ll be watching you like a hawk, that is all,” Craal said with very disrespectful voice. “Fine!” answered Gigerdius and left the office with frustration. Craal looked at Rubek’s face and smiled.
 Gigerdius stopped right outside Craal’s office. He checked the status of the Exploreison’s repairs. “Gigerdius to Drill, Drill how have the repairs started?” “Quite well, captain. We should be ready in no time,” answered Drill through the communicator. “Good, I might wanna leave this place sooner than I thought." "Why is that?" asked Drill, wondering what might be driving Gigerdius off so early. "I’ll explain that to you later, but keep me informed on any changes at the Exploreison, Gigerdius out," Gigerdius ended the conversation. He then proceeded to walk around a bit before heading to the conference room.
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-Sprak and R’Derex have arrived at the conference room. Gigerdius walked in the room. “Captain, the repairs aboard the Exploreison are proceeding well, we will be ready to depart soon,” said Sprak when he noticed Gigerdius’s entrance. Gigerdius noded and proceeded to sit down while saying: “It’s good that we’ll be ready soon, there are some weird things happening here.” “What do you mean, Captain?” asked R’Derex, wondering what the captain meant with those words. “Colonel Craal seems to dislike me, for my past ‘actions’ during the Dominion War,” Gigerdius replied, a certain confused tone could be heard in his voice. “Hmm, Craal seems to run this station like a military base, so that really doesn’t surprise me,” said R’Derex and didn’t consider Gigerdius’s experiences so anomalous.
+Sprak and R’Derex have arrived at the conference room. Gigerdius walked in the room. “Captain, the repairs aboard the Exploreison are proceeding well, we will be ready to depart soon,” said Sprak when he noticed Gigerdius’s entrance. Gigerdius noded and proceeded to sit down while saying: “It’s good that we’ll be ready soon, there are some weird things happening here.” “What do you mean, Captain?” asked R’Derex, wondering what the captain meant with those words. “Colonel Craal seems to dislike me, for my past ‘actions’ during the Timocracy War,” Gigerdius replied, a certain confused tone could be heard in his voice. “Hmm, Craal seems to run this station like a military base, so that really doesn’t surprise me,” said R’Derex and didn’t consider Gigerdius’s experiences so anomalous.
 Suddenly, the lights blinked off and then back on, the place shook and some odd sound effects could be heard. Sprak, R’Derex and Gigerdius were amazed. “What happened?” was R’Derex first comment, although he was rather sure none of them exactly knew what was going on. Gigerdius looked around a bit and then replied: “Sounded like a bomb.” “Perhaps we should investigate,” recommended Sprak. “Good idea,” Gigerdius responded and stood up from the chair, they all walked at the door where they were stopped by a security officer: “Sirs, for your safety I must demand that you remain in the conference room.” “What has happened?” asked R’Derex wanting for more information. “We’ve had a bombing(Somebody set us up the bomb!), Colonel Craal will inform you more once he has more information, until then remain in the conference room,” answered the security officer swiftly. The crewmembers moved back into the room.
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 “Gigerdius to Exploreison, Drill, lock down the Exploreison and inform Deket that he’s getting four dead people and seven wounded there!” Gigerdius instructed Drill. “Yes, sir. Captain, we also detected an explosion at the Peace Station, is everything okay there?” asked Drill through the communicator, as he was a bit worried of the turn of the events that had occurred. “I’m not sure yet, I’ll contact you when we have some more info, Gigerdius out,” Gigerdius quitted the conversation. “Any chance I could assist you?” asked R’Derex, obviously Craal’s forces could use some assistance. “I think that’s OK, we are quite short handed here anyway,” admitted Craal as well. He seemed to still have some respect towards R’Derex. Perhaps because his job was closest to that of the ground forces’. “Colonel, it would be wise to allow us access back to our ship, as we cannot help you here to any considerable extent. Our facilities onboard the Exploreison are far superior to the equipment here,” Sprak began to explain to Craal, he realized that he and Gigerdius couldn’t really do anything useful aboard the Peace Station, but could rather use the resources at the Exploreison. “On any other situation, you would stay here, but we need assistance, you might as well use the Exploreison,” Craal replied and seemed to be calming down as he was letting them to go. “Thank you, colonel,” responded Sprak, calmly as Lihters do always. Gigerdius and Sprak then stood up from their chairs, Gigerdius presses his communicator and said: “Gigerdius to bridge transporter room, two to beam out.” After that they were energized. R’Derex then stood up from his chair and said: “Let’s get to work then.” “I’ll escort you to the bombsite,” Craal replied and they all left from the conference room.
-Grillka and Drill were waiting in the transporter room of the bridge of the Exploreison when Sprak and Gigerdius beamed in. Once Sprak and Gigerdius materialized Grillka asked: “So what really happened there?” “I have no idea, that’s why we’re here. What we do know is that a bomb exploded there,” replied Gigerdius as he and Sprak stepped away from the transporter pad. “I would need to run scans on the Peace Station to actually determine what exactly happened there,” Sprak explained. “I see, but why didn’t you inform me that you were actually going to visit the station?” Grillka asked from Gigerdius, as she wanted to know why she wasn’t informed about him visiting the station. “Well, I thought you were still sleeping… and I was somewhat eager to meet the new commander of the Peace Station, even though I regret that now a bit...” replied Gigerdius, knowing that Grillka may not take that explanation so openly. However, Drill was the next one to make the question: “What do you mean, captain?” “Colonel Craal does seem to have irrationally extreme militaristic tendencies. It is almost as if he considers us to be in a state of war. He also appears to harbor certain distrust for the captain because of the Dominion War incident,” explained Sprak. “Militaristic commander, interesting… but shouldn’t you do your scans now?” Drill said as they had already wasted some time just talking in the transporter room. “Yeah, you’re right we really should,” Gigerdius replied and they all left from the transporter room. Outside Grillka still commented: “I hope you inform me better about your trips in the future, that IS the military protocol if I have to remind you.” “I understand, I’ll try to remember that, but no guarantees,” Gigerdius replied in his usual attitude of not caring about the military ways. Grillka sighed as Gigerdius didn’t seem to much care about following the correct protocols. “And we have much more important matters to attend to now,” Gigerdius continued and headed for the bridge. Grillka still looked troubled and commented to herself: “They should never allow ambassadors to be captains.” “Did you say something commander?” Gigerdius asked, as he could hear her saying something.
+Grillka and Drill were waiting in the transporter room of the bridge of the Exploreison when Sprak and Gigerdius beamed in. Once Sprak and Gigerdius materialized Grillka asked: “So what really happened there?” “I have no idea, that’s why we’re here. What we do know is that a bomb exploded there,” replied Gigerdius as he and Sprak stepped away from the transporter pad. “I would need to run scans on the Peace Station to actually determine what exactly happened there,” Sprak explained. “I see, but why didn’t you inform me that you were actually going to visit the station?” Grillka asked from Gigerdius, as she wanted to know why she wasn’t informed about him visiting the station. “Well, I thought you were still sleeping… and I was somewhat eager to meet the new commander of the Peace Station, even though I regret that now a bit...” replied Gigerdius, knowing that Grillka may not take that explanation so openly. However, Drill was the next one to make the question: “What do you mean, captain?” “Colonel Craal does seem to have irrationally extreme militaristic tendencies. It is almost as if he considers us to be in a state of war. He also appears to harbor certain distrust for the captain because of the Timocracy War incident,” explained Sprak. “Militaristic commander, interesting… but shouldn’t you do your scans now?” Drill said as they had already wasted some time just talking in the transporter room. “Yeah, you’re right we really should,” Gigerdius replied and they all left from the transporter room. Outside Grillka still commented: “I hope you inform me better about your trips in the future, that IS the military protocol if I have to remind you.” “I understand, I’ll try to remember that, but no guarantees,” Gigerdius replied in his usual attitude of not caring about the military ways. Grillka sighed as Gigerdius didn’t seem to much care about following the correct protocols. “And we have much more important matters to attend to now,” Gigerdius continued and headed for the bridge. Grillka still looked troubled and commented to herself: “They should never allow ambassadors to be captains.” “Did you say something commander?” Gigerdius asked, as he could hear her saying something.

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