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Mad Gigerdi Jr. at 12:44, 1 December 2007

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The novel version has certain changes compared to the movie version. Certain bugs have been fixed, for example the first bomb scene. Craal enters the room almost instantly after the bombing and knows EVERYTHING about it. This just didn't make any sense so it was fixed for the novel version. A lot of things have been enhanced too. This includes "Duty Calls".<br>
[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 14:44, 1 December 2007 (EET)

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	Grillka and Drill were waiting in the transporter room of the bridge of the Exploreison when Sprak and Gigerdius beamed in. Once Sprak and Gigerdius materialized Grillka asked: “So what really happened there?” “I have no idea, that’s why we’re here. What we do know is that a bomb exploded there,” replied Gigerdius as he and Sprak stepped away from the transporter pad. “I would need to run scans on the Peace Station to actually determine what exactly happened there,” Sprak explained. “I see, but why didn’t you inform me that you were actually going to visit the station?” Grillka asked from Gigerdius, as she wanted to know why she wasn’t informed about him visiting the station. “Well, I thought you were still sleeping… and I was somewhat eager to meet the new commander of the Peace Station, even though I regret that now a bit...” replied Gigerdius, knowing that Grillka may not take that explanation so openly. However, Drill was the next one to make the question: “What do you mean, captain?” “Colonel Craal does seem to have irrationally extreme militaristic tendencies. It is almost as if he considers us to be in a state of war. He also appears to harbor certain distrust for the captain because of the Dominion War incident,” explained Sprak. “Militaristic commander, interesting… but shouldn’t you do your scans now?” Drill said as they had already wasted some time just talking in the transporter room. “Yeah, you’re right we really should,” Gigerdius replied and they all left from the transporter room. Outside Grillka still commented: “I hope you inform me better about your trips in the future, that IS the military protocol if I have to remind you.” “I understand, I’ll try to remember that, but no guarantees,” Gigerdius replied in his usual attitude of not caring about the military ways. Grillka sighed as Gigerdius didn’t seem to much care about following the correct protocols. “And we have much more important matters to attend to now,” Gigerdius continued and headed for the bridge. Grillka still looked troubled and commented to herself: “They should never allow ambassadors to be captains.” “Did you say something commander?” Gigerdius asked, as he could hear her saying something.		Grillka and Drill were waiting in the transporter room of the bridge of the Exploreison when Sprak and Gigerdius beamed in. Once Sprak and Gigerdius materialized Grillka asked: “So what really happened there?” “I have no idea, that’s why we’re here. What we do know is that a bomb exploded there,” replied Gigerdius as he and Sprak stepped away from the transporter pad. “I would need to run scans on the Peace Station to actually determine what exactly happened there,” Sprak explained. “I see, but why didn’t you inform me that you were actually going to visit the station?” Grillka asked from Gigerdius, as she wanted to know why she wasn’t informed about him visiting the station. “Well, I thought you were still sleeping… and I was somewhat eager to meet the new commander of the Peace Station, even though I regret that now a bit...” replied Gigerdius, knowing that Grillka may not take that explanation so openly. However, Drill was the next one to make the question: “What do you mean, captain?” “Colonel Craal does seem to have irrationally extreme militaristic tendencies. It is almost as if he considers us to be in a state of war. He also appears to harbor certain distrust for the captain because of the Dominion War incident,” explained Sprak. “Militaristic commander, interesting… but shouldn’t you do your scans now?” Drill said as they had already wasted some time just talking in the transporter room. “Yeah, you’re right we really should,” Gigerdius replied and they all left from the transporter room. Outside Grillka still commented: “I hope you inform me better about your trips in the future, that IS the military protocol if I have to remind you.” “I understand, I’ll try to remember that, but no guarantees,” Gigerdius replied in his usual attitude of not caring about the military ways. Grillka sighed as Gigerdius didn’t seem to much care about following the correct protocols. “And we have much more important matters to attend to now,” Gigerdius continued and headed for the bridge. Grillka still looked troubled and commented to herself: “They should never allow ambassadors to be captains.” “Did you say something commander?” Gigerdius asked, as he could hear her saying something.
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	The disappearance of G.A.S. Patna is not currently explained. The amount of dead and wounded also seem to change, but that shouldn't be difficult to fix. Since Patna is nowhere to be found during the movie, it should depart before the Exploreison arrives.<br>		The disappearance of G.A.S. Patna is not currently explained. The amount of dead and wounded also seem to change, but that shouldn't be difficult to fix. Since Patna is nowhere to be found during the movie, it should depart before the Exploreison arrives.<br>
	[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.\|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 00:12, 3 December 2007 (EET)		[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.\|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 00:12, 3 December 2007 (EET)
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		+	I'm planning on rewriting most of this stuff after Harbinger is done. To write it like I would write Harbinger now. The story itself would stay pretty much the same, but rather than having some radiation or somethin' hit them they would rather be sabotaged, to lure them to the Peace Station. Also I was considering some enhancements to the story, like a sabotage to the Peace Station reactor core and such. Duty calls also needs to be rewritten, maybe include some disappearances of Craal's unit in the lower decks. More conflict between the two crews is also needed.<br>
		+	--[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.\|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 12:44, 10 April 2009 (EEST)

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	The novel version has certain changes compared to the movie version. Certain bugs have been fixed, for example the first bomb scene. Craal enters the room almost instantly after the bombing and knows EVERYTHING about it. This just didn't make any sense so it was fixed for the novel version. A lot of things have been enhanced too. This includes "Duty Calls".<br>		The novel version has certain changes compared to the movie version. Certain bugs have been fixed, for example the first bomb scene. Craal enters the room almost instantly after the bombing and knows EVERYTHING about it. This just didn't make any sense so it was fixed for the novel version. A lot of things have been enhanced too. This includes "Duty Calls".<br>
	[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.\|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 14:44, 1 December 2007 (EET)		[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.\|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 14:44, 1 December 2007 (EET)
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		+	The disappearance of G.A.S. Patna is not currently explained. The amount of dead and wounded also seem to change, but that shouldn't be difficult to fix. Since Patna is nowhere to be found during the movie, it should depart before the Exploreison arrives.<br>
		+	[[User:Mad Gigerdi Jr.\|Mad Gigerdi Jr.]] 00:12, 3 December 2007 (EET)

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